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The Old Barn


Old barn retires
on hillside.
New shed handles the
old farms load.
Blisters and busted
knuckles are replaced
by how well one can
sell acreage.
Along the outside,
classic vehicles rust.
Heavy equipment
grows lighter as metal
like the money that once
made the farm work,
vanishes.
All that used to be is
now all it can be.
No floors inside that old
barn anymore. Boards
all broken with age, farmer
by inflation.
Has all he can do to manage
the Walker.



(2)



The Fields


Shingles from a once
sturdy farmhouse
filter rain where the earth
grows loose.
All that had plant and
harvest is now dead
and flat
'til the trees
back by the brook give
the eyes a good climb.
Rat's nest back in the left
help the snakes
survive. As long as there is
rodent, there is
kill.
The Deer have no corn
to eat or hide in,
no wheat to bake
in the farmer's bread
and the passerby likes it
that way.
Fences go up around
a survey, while the works to sell
off portions looks back
to the brook.
You can see if anything sold
between those rocks.



(3)



Past The Fields


Brings me back
to the old barn.
The months have
brought the farmer
to sell all but ten
acres for he and his
wife of almost
sixty years. The worn
farmhouse stood
so many generations
like a statue of
esteem, now sets
a single wide
where the children
bring their young
to see the grandfolks
on week-ends and
holidays. The Farmer,
even in his weakness
does odd jobs on
the side. Says he's still
one hell of a carpenter.
A pond fills the emptiness
the corn left and the barn has
just too much pride to fall.
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From Chapbook "Rattling Cages."
(Grateful Acknowledgements to Flash!Point Press).
All Rights Reserved.
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Do not use these poems under any circumstances
without written permission from the author.
Copyright 2004 by Flash!Point Press, 2010 by Doug Paugh
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*low-kee--Poetry Jun 23, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks for the :+fav:'s buddy.
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:iconheaja:
This is really great. It reminded me of a barn I rode my bike past the other day. It was very old and abandoned, there was an old decaying car inside of it still, but right next to it was a shed with some flat tired machinery that is still in use on the farm, presuming they have to dig it out of the mud each year.
That was really excellent. Wish I could come listen to you recite!

--Nate
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*low-kee--Poetry Jun 17, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks, I appreciate the compliment. I still do readings and Book signings,
but not as often. Now-a-days I can do them when I want to. Gives me more time
to write and do family things. Family and friends always come first for me.
That's how I find stuff to write about.
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:iconpyrrhite:
heartbreaking, so tender, so sad.
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*low-kee--Poetry Jun 13, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you. Those 3 go in the order you read them in, assuming you read all three.
They're out of my chapbook, Rattling Cages, which took 1st place in a Full length Chapbook
Competition in 2002, published in 2004. These three I think I've read at every Poetry Reading I've done
in the past 10 years. Certainly favorites for me. Your comment is well taken and appreciated.
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:iconpyrrhite:
Yes I read all three, I very much appreciate the sentiment presented, I love old farms and feel sad so many have succumbed exactly as you have described in your beautiful way.
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*low-kee--Poetry Jun 13, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks for the kind comments, and compliments.
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